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    Thanks for taking time to review our new site http://www.CharmingHealth.com. All comments welcome.We have revamped the site recently, with lot of added content. We are running online Wellness Center at http://www.CharmingHealth.com and offer services to our clients for 'Balancing Emotions' (?) as per their personal needs. As 'peace of mind' is the biggest challenge of 21st century and over 65% of total world population is always facing some emotional idiosyncrasies (trifle or serious) at all the time, obviously this concept targets unique niche. Due to inconvenience in managing deliveries, we dropped the idea of shipping products and now offer purely online consultation for "Balancing Negative Emotions". The concept discussed on the site is unique and untapped and is pretty novice but I tried to put lot new things into my site. Is there anything I can do with my site to improve it? Should I work with this concept in a different way? Should I sell my own service along with products too so I have more control?

    Any other suggestions appreciated. Thanks…. could you give a quick review? This would be very nice. Regards,
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    Sunny
    http://www.CharmingHealth.com

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    hiya

    Now that's the right way to ask for a site review.. .. lol

    ok here's my (not particularly educated but u did ask) thoughts :

    If I landed there with no clue what the site is about, it would take me too long to figure it out (you only get very few seconds really to let people know what's what)

    there is no "jumps out and slasps me in the face" clear single split second discenable message on the site telling me what it is and what it can do for me personally ..

    almost 20% of my screen is covered with the disclaimer at the bottom and links, I would push that down out of view and have the biggest yellow bar as my visible screen bottom, and make the visible screen full of information with a clear "sticks out loud and clear" message of what the site does and what it can do for ME ,

    The page does fit on my screen without scrolling but much of the info visible isn't relative to what I may want so I would push it down outta view, if they scroll then they are looking what else you have so that's a bonus,

    possibly the text on the left should be a bit bigger too.. like I said people scan sites and there isn't much to catch the eye there.. I know there are visible links but make relevant words bolder maybe !?

    Balancing my emotions through flowers seems a bit hippy on first thought but I can see the sense in it but you split second surfer may not so I think if it was clearer of kinda made me ask "HOW can flowers balance my emotions" then I would want to know more ... maybe another angle like links to
    "flowers that make you smile .. cry.. happy ...sad...romantic.. " ..focus on the negative emotions people have and link to the relevant part of your site maybe ? etc ..

    ok end waffle apart from the above which people may or may not agree with, I like the cheery feel to your site and hope it goes well for you

    Regarding products....

    people like to do things so there and then, they hate waiting and even if they have ordered something.. they feel better already as if on the way forward ..ok relate this to fat products..excercise videos..books..tapes..etc which sell by the million to people that dont use them at all!! yet still order time after time..

    I would slap any and all relevant things on there, tapes, books, dvd's, scents, oils ..etc ) as once you have a visitor that's interested they may buy associated stuff.

    Last edited by Shane; 05-05-04 at 01:52 PM.

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    Hi All,

    The Index page has been revamped now. All Obscure images have made clear. Content is changed. An attempt has made to remove the ambiguity from the minds of viewers about the nature of business. I hope these changes will work.. …Just have a look at corrected page of CharmingHealth…. Comments are welcome…Thank you!
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