hiya
Now that's the right way to ask for a site review.... lol
ok here's my (not particularly educated but u did ask) thoughts :
If I landed there with no clue what the site is about, it would take me too long to figure it out (you only get very few seconds really to let people know what's what)
there is no "jumps out and slasps me in the face" clear single split second discenable message on the site telling me what it is and what it can do for me personally ..
almost 20% of my screen is covered with the disclaimer at the bottom and links, I would push that down out of view and have the biggest yellow bar as my visible screen bottom, and make the visible screen full of information with a clear "sticks out loud and clear" message of what the site does and what it can do for ME ,
The page does fit on my screen without scrolling but much of the info visible isn't relative to what I may want so I would push it down outta view, if they scroll then they are looking what else you have so that's a bonus,
possibly the text on the left should be a bit bigger too.. like I said people scan sites and there isn't much to catch the eye there.. I know there are visible links but make relevant words bolder maybe !?
Balancing my emotions through flowers seems a bit hippy on first thought but I can see the sense in it but you split second surfer may not so I think if it was clearer of kinda made me ask "HOW can flowers balance my emotions" then I would want to know more ... maybe another angle like links to
"flowers that make you smile .. cry.. happy ...sad...romantic.. " ..focus on the negative emotions people have and link to the relevant part of your site maybe ? etc ..
ok end waffle apart from the above which people may or may not agree with, I like the cheery feel to your site and hope it goes well for you
Regarding products....
people like to do things so there and then, they hate waiting and even if they have ordered something.. they feel better already as if on the way forward ..ok relate this to fat products..excercise videos..books..tapes..etc which sell by the million to people that dont use them at all!! yet still order time after time..
I would slap any and all relevant things on there, tapes, books, dvd's, scents, oils ..etc ) as once you have a visitor that's interested they may buy associated stuff.
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