Give Comments on my Website

[internet-laptop]

Hi everyone,

I just joined this forum today. I have a website which I hope members of forum will be able to give me some positive feedback and comments. I designed this website using frontpage, I am not quite an expert on Html language. I want to join some affiliate programs into my website, can anyone after viewing my website and give some suggestions on how should I BEGIN or improve my current layout. Thanks

My website is www.internet-laptop.co.uk

internet-laptop

[smn2]

Hi

If your site is a shop then you should put items
for sale in the shop window (i.e. on the homepage).
Save the blurb for the about us page, for those people
that are bothered.

How many offline shops would you bother to go into
if there were no goodies to look at in the window?

That's how it works online.

Site looks okay, if a bit wide

Steve

[srcudlipp]

Hi,

The basic grammar on the homepage could use some attention - it reads a lot like someone foreign trying to write in English - lots of wrong tenses etc

:eek:

[breathe]

The site does not work in firefox and does not display well in IE.

[internet-laptop]

Hi, thanks for all your advise, i will take it on board. Can anyone advise me on how to design a good website that suit affiliate program? thanks

[Itchy]

Originally Posted by smnash How many offline shops would you bother to go into if there were no goodies to look at in the window?

Theres a shop near me with blacked out windows but lots of men go into it whats that all about


If your claiming to be a company wheres your company details displayed? claiming to be something that your not could land you in hot water http://wck2.companieshouse.gov.uk/ theyve never heard of you

[Spartacus]

Originally Posted by Itchy If your claiming to be a company wheres your company details displayed? claiming to be something that your not could land you in hot water http://wck2.companieshouse.gov.uk/ theyve never heard of you

Not sure the word "company" is a term protected by a royal charter or anything. Like "architect" is and "engineer" isn't.

I've got a degree in engineering yet anyone with a screwdriver seems to claim that title as their own.

Sorry if I've gone of at a tangent here.

BTW, sorry but I wasn't a great fan of the site. Main thing was the layout and colours and that there was to much to read. Just looked amateur to me. Just like my site which I'm gonna fix when I get round to it.